When I first started writing, being unable to finish a draft (even after I had built a complex world and had come up with exactly what was going to happen) seemed to be my theme. I assumed that I enjoyed building worlds and not actually writing.

Between finishing my first draft of As Sure As The Snow Falls and now, I’ve discovered that that is not the case. I love to write. And I like to world build.

I just hate writing everything that’s in my head down in logical paragraphs.

I love coming up with worlds, societies, species, kingdoms, lore, and magic systems in my head. But I can’t stand taking what I’ve come up with and jotting it down. I especially loathe doing it for characters. They exist so perfectly in my head, and yet every time I try explain their personality in an easy-to-reference chart, my brain goes blank.

I desperately want to write ASATSF’s second draft, but I feel as if I have to have everything perfectly planned out on paper so it doesn’t turn out like the disaster that is draft one. This includes detailed character charts for side characters, descriptions of the other kingdoms, and lore.

But at this point, all I want to do is write. Because every time I sit down to plan, I close my computer five minutes later.

So, I may as well start writing. Because these ideas need to go somewhere, and it’s not in my Notion page.


Do you like to build worlds, or write and come up with it as you go? Do you have an effective system for world building?

Thank you so much for reading my vent, have a blessed day!

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4 responses to “Oh, The Woes Of World Building”

  1. Kay Adelin Avatar

    This rant sounds like you’re a pantser trying to be a plotter XP Every time I get a new idea or concept, I usually jot a random line or two down about it to sum it up so I won’t forget it should I need to take a break, but then I just start writing. Oftentimes my ideas come to me AS I’m writing. Though sometimes it helps to imagine the scene before I sit down to write.
    If I have a rough draft and I’m rewriting that draft (as I often do for second drafts) I use THAT as my outline (unless I’m making massive changes to the actual story and nothing of the original chapter can be recycled). Of course, this is different for my Epic-length fantasy series, but your story seems short enough to use the rough draft as the actual outline, and just add the ideas you have retained into it.
    (A good rule of thumb which you probably already know anyway, is to remember to layer the world-building and description into the story. Never make it a separate element.)

    I call myself a pantser who plots, as I generally need some loose framework or “plot” to work around, but it cannot be too strict as I get burn out and boredom from the idea if I plot out TOO much. (with the exception of my fantasy epic again, but that is a whole other topic XP) I am actually planning on writing a World building post on how to make a good fantasy political system sometime soon on the blog XP

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    1. Cally May Avatar

      All of this is gold ✨ I definitely am more of a pantser, but I’ve been trying to do better with plotting XD. And I’m the same way, my best ideas either come as I’m writing or when I’m talking about my projects with my sister 😅

      PLEASE write that post. I need it!!! Especially for another project that I’m thinking about.

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      1. Kay Adelin Avatar

        Yes, that sounds like me, haha! I would say, if your writing is coming along just fine without plotting and the plotting your doing is not helping at all and just making you hate the process or even the story, to just stick with what works best for you. From experience, it’s not worth ruining a story/the fun of writing by trying to force something that doesn’t work. Though I am a proponent of at least trying different ways since you never know!
        Yesss talking about them definitely provides more story ideas! XD XD

        I’ll try to get it up in February, so keep an eye out for it then!

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  2. Small Giraffe Avatar

    I’m the same. I like worldbuilding and writing, but if I try to incorporate my worldbuilding into my writing, it turns out terrible.

    You might find it helpful doing your worldbuilding, and then completely throwing it by the wayside while you write. Like, you can make a world, and have those ideas in the back of your head, but not actually tell the reader about it. Sure, when it’s necessary, tell them quickly the rough idea, but I’ve found that mostly, as a reader, you can get the rough gist of the world, and pick up on a lot of the rules even without those planned paragraphs explaining everything.

    And if you don’t explain it, you can also change things (to an extent, obviously) to make the story flow better.

    I hope that makes sense… It did in my head xD

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